I wrote this myself!

A moment

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GiulioRiccardi

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Opening post by GiulioRiccardi

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Hi everyone, since I am very happy with all the comments, criticisms etc. that I have received and which are very important to me, I am also sharing with you this short piece, "un attimo" (a moment), which has an extremely simple structure!

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Reply 2 by Videoclip

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A bit boring, I'm sorry. Too much, but too repetitive ... even if we are in a pop-like context tending towards minimalism, there is truly too little. Perhaps some parts extracted here and there could serve as background in some scene of a soap opera, where the important part is the text provided by the acting.

Even the melodic idea, in this track (unlike the others), isn't exactly very "noble".

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Reply 5 by pianistamaggiorenneDi38

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it surprises me that no one, including the composer, has had this idea: the piece is not bad at all, but it sounds as if something is missing, and to be precise, the melody is missing; in fact, it seems more like an accompaniment, and it is

Dico 'it surprises me' in the sense that it truly means that no one listens to things in the same way another person does. To me, it seemed like a really obvious thing but I repeat, it is only proof that we listen to things differently

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Reply 9 by pianistamaggiorenneDi38

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Videoclip wrote:

...which in plain English is what I wrote in the first post

'background' doesn't seem to be the same thing as 'accompaniment' to me, since a background can very well have a theme

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