Awakening

The material is very interesting, seriously. It's a bit "messy," let's say, and the conclusion isn't conclusive (one would expect a follow-up). But if you can tidy it up a bit to give your piece a clearer structure, I'd say we're there.

I agree with Carlos, the material is definitely excellent. Well done Giulio!

I uploaded it to my playlist. I like it very much.

Decidedly much better than the other one. Congratulations!

I liked it, I trust the technical and expert opinion of Carlos which usually emerges in this kind of pieces

The theme is certainly interesting, the reprise at 45'' is also excellent....the idea or development that emerges at 26'' is very weak, I think because stylistically it refers back to a setting preceding the theme.

In the end you cut it short, I sense good musicality and little control of the means ...

It could be a great Aforisma, but aside from confirming your musicality, I find it too redundant... a condition quite difficult to achieve in just over a minute... and yet, so much that ...

In my opinion, the most successful part is the initial idea, and especially how the reprise arrives, which makes the material even more captivating.