I tried to give coherence to the rhythm, without getting lost in too many rubatos. However, I noticed that I had to take more care with the legato and the difference between the various colors... in any case, it is a piece that I liked for its simplicity, it sounds like a lullaby. I hope you like it!
Well! I listened to your waltz and the performance matches your choices. The hand is very natural and that is good. A bit more legato wouldn't hurt, and less presence from the left hand. The instrument being out of tune and poorly intonated does not help the expression. Therefore, it is also difficult to bring out the intentions. Well done