Well guys, good evening to everyone, after 2 minutes today I dedicated myself to a waltz
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Well guys, good evening to everyone, after 2 minutes today I dedicated myself to a waltz
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Graceful and good! certainly to be included in a volume of easy pieces for piano.
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thanks! At the moment I have written relatively simple and short pieces
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5...I forgot the number ahahah, two minuets, a waltz, a barcarolle and a berceuse
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So what are you waiting for? Put them together and publish them
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If it's there for the public ahahahah
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And well done to our antares86, but Chopin is getting the better of Bach (AND THIS IS NOT A GOOD THING), with that avatar you "risk" betraying our Sebastian!!
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But seriously, I wrote a bicinium yesterday, I told you so, and in Renaissance style... I'll post an image of Josquin!!! Ahahahah it is actually, aside from being a waltz, I was hoping to have been more inspired by Schumann ahah
In any case it seems, and I repeat, it seems, that my strength is precisely counterpoint!
PS. If it really sounds like Chopin, throw it in the trash!!!! Ahahahahahahahah
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I still have to listen to it, these days are a mess.
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Listened, then in my opinion it seems like something is missing, anyway listening to it an additional part comes to mind.
In the "almost" finale I am more convinced, probably because it results in being more "full".
In any case, it doesn't remind me much of Chopin.
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Ah I could have undoubtedly extended it... but since I was working on short pieces and experimenting with a "new" arrangement of development and recapitulation... I limited myself to 24 bars
Well, it's true that the last recapitulation is a bit more harmonically filled out... I didn't want to make everything the same, haha, I was undecided whether to modify the first little recapitulation as well...
In fact, I wasn't inspired by Chopin at all... definitely more Schumann, at least formally
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I find it captivating and I also agree with the idea that one remains suspended for a moment at the end of the development... as if expecting something a little more, not wanting it to end so abruptly.
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It was an experiment inspired by Schumann... (4 development+4 recapitulation)x2
I wanted to try something out
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Smooth and pleasant
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Thanks kappa
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Announcement announcement... I am venturing into composing a suite... in any case, it won't be something short, although I don't know whether to publish the individual movements or the whole suite together...
Being so diminutive tells me that I'm becoming more Chopin than Bach haha
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Sorry, but I'm only hearing it now... yes, yes, I find it simple, it is, but clear in its intentions. To be honest... how much I miss a central part (like an intermezzo, to be understood) to then pick up the theme again..
It would have added a lot.
Anyway, good, interesting.
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Thanks, well this was still little more than an exercise...
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Experiment dedicated to Schumann perfectly successful! Well done!!
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Thank you!