I wrote this myself!

mini waltz

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Opening post by antares86

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Well guys, good evening to everyone, after 2 minutes today I dedicated myself to a waltz

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Reply 2 by giovannip

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Graceful and good! certainly to be included in a volume of easy pieces for piano.

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Reply 7 by Piccinesco

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And well done to our antares86, but Chopin is getting the better of Bach (AND THIS IS NOT A GOOD THING), with that avatar you "risk" betraying our Sebastian!!

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Reply 8 by antares86

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But seriously, I wrote a bicinium yesterday, I told you so, and in Renaissance style... I'll post an image of Josquin!!! Ahahahah it is actually, aside from being a waltz, I was hoping to have been more inspired by Schumann ahah

In any case it seems, and I repeat, it seems, that my strength is precisely counterpoint!

PS. If it really sounds like Chopin, throw it in the trash!!!! Ahahahahahahahah

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Reply 10 by Piccinesco

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Listened, then in my opinion it seems like something is missing, anyway listening to it an additional part comes to mind.

In the "almost" finale I am more convinced, probably because it results in being more "full".

In any case, it doesn't remind me much of Chopin.

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Reply 11 by antares86

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Ah I could have undoubtedly extended it... but since I was working on short pieces and experimenting with a "new" arrangement of development and recapitulation... I limited myself to 24 bars

Well, it's true that the last recapitulation is a bit more harmonically filled out... I didn't want to make everything the same, haha, I was undecided whether to modify the first little recapitulation as well...

In fact, I wasn't inspired by Chopin at all... definitely more Schumann, at least formally

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Reply 12 by nancy

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I find it captivating and I also agree with the idea that one remains suspended for a moment at the end of the development... as if expecting something a little more, not wanting it to end so abruptly.

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Reply 13 by antares86

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It was an experiment inspired by Schumann... (4 development+4 recapitulation)x2

I wanted to try something out

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Reply 16 by antares86

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Announcement announcement... I am venturing into composing a suite... in any case, it won't be something short, although I don't know whether to publish the individual movements or the whole suite together...

Being so diminutive tells me that I'm becoming more Chopin than Bach haha

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Reply 17 by maquieto

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Sorry, but I'm only hearing it now... yes, yes, I find it simple, it is, but clear in its intentions. To be honest... how much I miss a central part (like an intermezzo, to be understood) to then pick up the theme again..

It would have added a lot.

Anyway, good, interesting.

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