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Good evening, what I am posting now is what is churning in my head during the most.. nights! Obviously, I am not hoping for good judgments since it is something very minimal, but I like to express my thoughts somehow..
Goodnight to everyone with this particular lullaby..
https://soundcloud.com/giacomo-tora/anxietyresolution-pessimisticoptimistic
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...can you also provide the notes?
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what do you mean by can you also send the notes? do you mean the sheet music?
I recorded and put this piece together from the keyboard precisely because it was an improvisation, so I didn't write the sheet music, but if you tell me which piece interests you, I will write it for you
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...I meant the chord notes and anyway, where possible, the score.
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They seem to me like a few ideas proposed in succession; one part is very similar to the other piece you had proposed, which I had a good memory of.
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@Dilettante tomorrow I will send you the score @Oracolo yes, I often think about these "mystical" climbs
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Hi,
Personally, I liked it very much, also because it captures the setting well; I could have seen it in a movie! You can feel the experimental touch given the many ideas proposed, but these ideas are nonetheless well-connected. I hope that one day you will elaborate on these ideas by forming something longer and more complete, I am very curious!
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The idea of the panels in itself isn't bad (see Grieg, for example)... but I don't hear all this correlation or juxtaposition that should be present in a purely musical piece. If, as someone said, there had been images, then perhaps those would have helped a bit. On a perceptual level, as someone else said, they seem to me like ideas placed here and there, and perhaps even too many for such a short piece. If I may offer a suggestion, try to develop the proposed ideas.
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The image was and it was this one in the video. That night I was thinking a bit about how small and alone we were (at the moment) in the whole universe. I hadn't put the video, next time I will upload that one
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m_r9onEMTNo
Unfortunately I don't have time to sit down and develop ideas at the moment, but as soon as I have the chance I will certainly do so and I will listen to marzapane's suggestion!
PS: I think this thing about too many ideas at once corresponds perfectly to what I have in my head, thousands of ideas and thoughts in confusion! that is reflected when I compose?
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@Dilettante here are the chords.. I hope no composer lynches me for my mistakes (because there are surely some)
