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I like its delicacy

I like it, here are my impressions, keeping in mind that I am learning.... :

the theme in 'odd' measures is interesting (I didn't count them but it immediately sounds 'asymmetrical' to me),

the repetition of the initial theme is a bit too insistent; I would cut one of the repetitions to get to the variations that begin at about 00:31 sooner......

the coda is perhaps a bit long, especially the repeated chord at the end....given the brevity of the piece, I think that in proportion I would make the coda shorter

also, I think that when you introduce a new piece, it is interesting to write something about it as well, what it might represent, etc....I learned this from my current piano teacher, who always has us present the piece and give a few brief notes on it, describing the style a bit, etc.

If it were done this way for all music, I think that even the kind that people hate would be understood a little more, especially contemporary classical, etc...

and finally, personally, I am also interested in knowing things like what modes you used, what type of harmony you used..... no pressure, I am always curious about everything regarding music, I learn this way too....bye