Someone who believes in you

The beginning is too dilated (first 30''), the event at 40'' seems like quite a bit of filler to me... in the end, after a few seconds everything is just as it was before......Around minute 1:10'' it seems that the piece finally emerges ... I would start from there and then develop it. In short, more than half of the piece is introduction..a bit too much. Of course, if you were going on for 10 minutes, aside from a nice polish in the first minute...the story could have been different

Mhh.. I'm having trouble getting your point of view.. I understand perfectly well what you are saying, though.. so I missed the mark completely :/

I'll be more careful next time..

Thanks for the video clip

Yannick, obviously this is just my opinion... what I pointed out to you as shortcomings, maybe I am being very demanding... let's just say that compared to your other piece that I listened to, this seems a bit below it

I understand.. and I thank you

Ultimately, by "satisfying" the most demanding ones, you make everyone happy.. so I will make it gold!

Yannick, this time you missed the mark. Even I'm feeling a bit of boredom... and I'm someone who is easily pleased

even boredom? or mom do you mean the intro or the whole piece?

It's a bit of a mix... it starts but doesn't take off, it takes off but lands immediately... it starts again but the journey is over

So you don't mean the composition itself.. you mean the general trend?