Choral Workshop 2013

I entered mine. I just wanted to say that in the third to last bar I made a mistake in the nomenclature, writing I - I - II instead of it being V46 - V35

Thank you

You did well Punto Coronato, I really like your version too. Even Frank's also gave me a sort of "pastoral" effect which, I must say, is very pronounced in your arrangement... I would call it an almost liturgical piece; beautiful.

thanks for the other versions you wrote, I also really liked the one with the crowned dot

Comment on the chorale by Punto Coronato.

It flows and is pleasant to listen to; I would give some thought to the closing of the vc... for example, in the penultimate bar I would keep the G and give depth to the last two D's, avoiding touching the third in a register that doesn't sound very good.

For the rest, I find the second violin a bit static (especially in the 6-9 zone)... the viola is better, although it suffers a bit at the beginning.

In general, there are few imitations; they are not an obligation, but in some cases they come through, so perhaps it would have been worth creating a more systematic texture