Composition workshop: melody harmonization 2016

Antares, in some parts it seems a bit hard to me but I like it.

ah possible... it's one of the first songs I'm doing... I'm still getting the measurements right!!! actually it's my second song... which I will treat practically all in the form of a lied.

antares86 wrote:

is possible...

Does it happen to you, like in measure 10, to have the ninth flat exposed on the downbeat? To provide support, you would need more reference; try adding a G and an Eb to the right hand, and you will see that it will change... and you will have to change something in general to manage this new element in the piano texture.

In fact, the same situation in measure 14 of the song works very well with the F of the pf.

Nice piano intro and coda, too bad you are always under the singing with the arpeggios.

Mmmh indeed that appoggiatura didn't sound very good... good advice...

I am singing under the voice because my teacher told me to stay almost always below or at most at the same level unless I am looking for some effect

I'm about to upload a new version with the good abbot's advice... I feel a bit like Edmond Dantes ahahahahah and I have made other changes between measures 8 and 12

antares86 wrote:

I'm about to upload a new version

You have softened it a lot, I like it.

Thanks for sharing

You're welcome! I treated the melody with many more appoggiaturas

is it still possible to participate in this workshop?

The workshops are always open

Usually, the works are then collected in specific topics, in this specific case as per the first post

http://www.pianoconcerto.it/forum/index.php?/topic/6229-laboratorio-di-composizione-armonizzazione-melodia-2016-elaborati/

ok thanks for the info!